Walking down the road,
Crossing the street,
The world keeps moving
And so are my feet.
The world goes on,
On its own
Despite the brakes,
I’m applying on.
World moves on and on and on.
People come people go
Some make a mark
Some leave me hammered.
Others are the persons
I’m really interested in
To know their reaction
I’m grasping in.
People who seem good
Are not so good
People who seem ugly
Are not so ugly
The goodness of heart
Is all I’m seeking for
But the cruelness, wickedness
Is all I’m besieged for
The vicious people around me
Keep on mushrooming
The venom in them
Keeps me paralyzing
Hoping for help
I seek gods’ benediction
Else staying alive may become a fiction
The road I’m walking in
Is severely treacherous.
Accidents I’m going through
Is d experience I’m grasping.
Helping me as a Kevlar
To keep existing
But the damage once done
Cannot be undone
For everything I’m going through
There is still lots to come
A beautiful mind is all
I am searching for
Hope Google could
Search that for me
Else how tiring it’s going to be
Can u help me find that one
Someone whom I can entrust
Someone who can stand by me
When asked for
well I’m truly going to find more soon
For I have some whom I rely on
Ones who have really make a mark
Occupy a special place in my heart..
They know what I speak is true
Hope those special diamonds
Don’t turn into coal..
Let me see how much dents
I still have to seek
The pain in me is worth the feel.
----apoorv
wow....what an art !!!! Amazing............yeah This is a masterpiece....:)....go on Apoorv, you have that poet in you.....
ReplyDeletesahi yaar...mast likha hai..
ReplyDeletebest wishes for ur exams and the next poem
gud 1 ...............google search will help u
ReplyDeleteaur teripoem mebhi pain ka naaam aa hi gaya
logo ke paas itna faaltu time kaise hai???
ReplyDeleteAn amateurish poem to say the best. However, a journey of a thousand miles must start with a single step, or so said Confucius. Here's to your first step, Apoorv.
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ReplyDeletei like ur poems ur are good for a beginner u shoulkd just keep tryin and u could be great
ReplyDeletefrom ur friend kaitlynd frasier
gud work thr! n i like d title,'my odyssey'.. a li'l trip down memory lane.eh? :-).. i dunno y i end up comparin ur pieces 2 famous poems.. ths 1 kinda reminds me of'footprints'..
ReplyDeletedoes the vicious people point to "Mr lohit matani" and venom to his sarcasm??? :)
ReplyDeleteanyways, nice poem with a lot of philosophy n a lot of fun for me as i was comparing some characters to real life people... :)
How can you call a simple person like me a vicious person.
Delete@Lohit: I can never call you vicious.. Why do you think I mentioned you there.. You are among the few diamonds I have.
DeletePeople are not vicious or bad, its their actions under certain circumstances that could be due to various reasons that portrays them as evil. Human beings are all simple, its the unrevealed circumstances in which they are that make their actions/behavior complex to comprehend. ;)